Tutorial feed back

Tutorial feed back

For today’s tutorial I submitted these images:

I chose these because:

• They were the best images I thought I had to offer
•  they showed a good range of subject matter
• I thought using these images I put cross that I was heading down an environmental/political theme
•  Having a couple of black and white images shows that I willing to add variety to the presentation to my work.

Actual tutorial feedback:

Negatives:

• Black and white images were too dark/ out of place with the colours
• All images were too dark and lacking contrast
• Too many images on display
•  Lack of editing

Positives:

•  Good composition across all images
• Good diversity within the images presented
•  Clear theme
•  A lot of work been done

My response to feedback.

I’m pretty happy with the feedback that I got. When I went in the feedback session I presumed that it was a general check-up on what we had been doing in that last few weeks, rather than a proper group crit, so I wasn’t a hundred percent prepared with my image editing and print quality. As for the response to the black and white images, I think I agree as they don’t really fit aesthetically with the others and the colour variation not only look better but fit better within the group.